Those few of you who know my intense connection with "eyes of a loner & lips of a sinner", here is putting together some lines. There are many layers to them and just like it happens with everything in life, you may take any interpretation that 'makes sense' to you. However, my suggestion would be; DON'T try and make sense of it! Just FEEL it. Don't wonder what went through my mind when I wrote this or what metaphor I mean by certain word or why have I structured it in certain way or any just literary critic-like nonsense.
Just feel your breathing and read. Read the emotions that it creates within you, read with love!
Eyes of a loner
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Their paths crossed.
Their paths crossed.
In a moment there was oneness of pain & pleasure, heartbreak & union, tear &smile, love & hate.
Only thing remained- eyes of a loner.
Lips of a Sinner
When they are apart
Out comes cold shiver, angry rant, empty promises
Like a vacuum that doesn't depart
Out comes cold shiver, angry rant, empty promises
Like a vacuum that doesn't depart
When they turn outward
The world is not bold enough to handle them
Like an unsaid crime committed
The world is not bold enough to handle them
Like an unsaid crime committed
When they lay real close and stretch
The infinite love radiates and overflows
Like the one Rumi's poem fetch
Dear Universe, such is your wonder
In love with lips of a sinner
In love with lips of a sinner
If loner's eyes and sinner's lips have moved something inside you, SMILE. :)
Love,
Shivani
Images Sources:
Buddha:- http://goo.gl/dKAwG5
Shiva:- http://goo.gl/Xg8usw
Wow...beautiful
ReplyDeleteAmazingly put !
ReplyDeleteEspecially the choreography of words dancing with tunes of universe is so beautifully done
Lovely
Amazingly put !
ReplyDeleteEspecially the choreography of words dancing with tunes of universe is so beautifully done
Lovely